Friday, October 9, 2015

English 101 Blog Post #2

When I think of the best place I like to visit I would describe it as this, As you walk up you begin to feel as though your at a home away from home, a place where family and friendships exist, and a place where you can relax and enjoy yourself. As you enter the place you notice many eyes staring at you, but this doesn't make you feel uncomfortable, the eyes are harmless, you know that you belong here, and you being to feel the warmth that coincides with the entrance closing behind you. You begin to see the soft, warm colors that decorate the walls and create an atmosphere of warmth. You begin to smell the aroma of life, ones that are not necessarily all pleasant, but a smell that tells you that your not the only one there. The sounds of voices begin to enter your realm of perception and you know that all of your troubles and all of the stress of everyday life can be left outside, because here, here is where you feel the most comfortable, and here is where none of those problems matter.

1 comment:

  1. You use some great descriptions, but I am still unclear of where I am as a reader. Take me to this place in a different way. Provide more specific details and definitely more show over tell.

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